Move With Me (early demo) 🎵
Hey there Patrons - it's present day :)
This one goes to everyone supporting here - at any level. I'm so grateful to have you here and I wanted to share this song with you FIRST. I've played it live once - this past Tuesday night at the Big Dreamer Jam. This right here is my first recording of the song.
This is a love song about dancing even when we don't the moves.
I'd love any feedback you have on this track, because I'm in the process two songs to record with a band as demos for my upcoming album grant application. I'm thinking this song might be a nice contender, but I want to hear how it resonates with you.
Does this song represent my music well (does it fit the 'Von Bieker brand')?
Does this song grab you early on and keep your interest?
Does it evoke an emotional response?
You are free to listen and download to keep - enjoy! Just please let me know what you think when you do :)
LYRICS (in their current state ;)
Darling would you join me on the dance floor tonight
we both know we don’t have the moves down just right
But if I hold you close, and you hold me tight
the world will spin ‘round us, blurring these shimmering lights
Move with me
move with me
We don’t have to go nowhere
There’s nowhere that I’d rather be
Would you drive with me, under these stars
till we pass the motel and the last open bar
We’ll roll back the moonroof in our cheap compact car
let the northern lights teach us just how small the two of us are
Move with me
move with me
We don’t have to go nowhere
There’s nowhere that I’d rather be
You’ve got beautiful shoes on both your left feet
your blue eyes got me playing this song on repeat
so we get tangled up and we fall off the beat
but let’s never stop dancing, my girl, even after we leave
Move with me
move with me
We don’t have to go nowhere
There’s nowhere that I’d rather be
Than right here with you